Friday, September 9, 2011

Open To Feedback

I've been told, pretty recently, actually that when I rant, my rants aren't "long enough".
I truly do appreciate that a few of my readers, more so close friends, tell me their opinion about my blogs. It's extremely helpful, it takes me back to my Sophomore and Junior Language Arts classes, I had the same teacher for both years, and every time I wrote an essay I was always given feedback on what else to include, why, and to go deeper into my thoughts and words. I generally always thought that my writing had to be like my teacher's writing, long explanations, proving points to the very last strand. But I try to give myself some room to write what I feel and it doesn't have to be perfect.

I'm really going to try better at getting deeper into my thoughts so my readers (if I happen to even have any) can have a better understanding of what I'm talking about.
With that said (and I know I say those words a lot in these posts), let's try a rant for the day...Or night.

Example 1:
I'm not going to name any names, but let's go with Person A and Person B
Person A is a grumpier person, always has to be right, about everything. It's their way or no way. Oh and Person A is extremely rude and very self-centered.
Person B is a very calm person who truly does not like violence and tries their best to stay away from drama. They continuously try and try and do their best at everything, and when it comes to the saying "You are your biggest judge" It's 100% for them.

Anyhow, Person B has to go out of their way a lot to watch after other people and put their own things aside for another time. Person B is always using their time to wait after other people. But Person B has finally gotten to the point where they want to do things more so for themselves and have no worries. Person A, on the other hand is...well I'll just show you this face...

There, that basically explains it ^-^

(Credit to Google Images)

Anyways, Person B had their mind set and focused on one thing by the late afternoon, but one thing after another just had to come in their way and they never really got around to completing that one thing.
Person A was just nagging and nagging and nagging and always getting in the way of things and not really doing what they were supposed to be doing. It's like Person A went out of their way to be immature and make Person B feel like crap.

Person B finally had enough and blew up, was yelling and trying to make a point, but unfortunately Person A has a hard, thick skull where no one else's opinions or thoughts can get through to them. Person A told Person B to "Shut the [front door]" and that's really when Person B had enough. Unfortunately, just from that one little incident of all the stress building up and Person B blowing up over it, Person B may be getting grounded for a week and their car taken away...?

Wait...Car taken away...?
Let's rewind and go over the fact that Person B bought their car with their own money, they pay for their own gas, and their own money pays for their own insurance.

>>I want to know when the last case was with someone taking away someone else's car that the other person had paid fully with their own money, and the only reasoning the other other person had for taking away the car was "You live under in my house, therefore my rules."
Hmmmm...Let's say ummm...NEVER...?<<

Back to the story, Person B follows the rules, does everything they are told to do, and do it when they're told. Always home early. Watching an elementary kid, and keeping up with their own school work. Responsibilities much? Oh, forgot to add that Person B also has to be the one to pick up after [let's say Person C's] responsibilities. So we all know now that Person B is a very mature, and responsible person.
But just over one little blow-up Person B gets the hammer...Big time.
>Let's review the fact, No one I repeat, NO ONE has the right to take away another person's belongings, unless there is suspicion and illegal elements involved (and that would usually only be the police).<

So tell me...What the f***?!
Just from listening to this story, I'm completely baffled by this situation.
I'm just going to say that Person A has zero respect for others and (oh gosh) I could go on. Person A is an ass, 'nough said.

I think I have lost my train of thought, and yes (if you are the humorous type) my train has crashed.

Well anyways, looking back up and reminding myself that the title is 'Open To Feedback', anyone...and I mean...ANYONE who reads my blog are more than welcome to comment or anything really, and give me feedback on my blog posts and what would make it more enjoyable for YOU to read. I will say now, I do try to include my every explanation I have, but if there's more you'd like to know...Just tell me :)

2 comments:

  1. Knowing who persons A B and C are, IM SO SORRY KENDRA! I wish I could help!

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  2. Meh. It's fine...8 more months until I'm 18, then nobody can legally do something like that...I don't even think it's legal at all, no matter what age I currently am.

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